this one hurt to read in the right way. the heroin stuff is genuinely scary — not in a dramatic way but in how matter-of-fact it reads, which is somehow worse. i hope raman finds his way through, and i hope you have someone holding space for you while you hold it for him. thinking of you both, sending loads of love.
First of all your story telling is so immaculate, you have such a strong grip on the show don't tell scheme of prose and I love how you do not resort to only that. You put elaborating sentences in between to add weight to certain dialogues, brilliant story and brilliant execution. Pls don kill yourself G, i need to read more stories from you😔
bitch why do i always find all these stories that u write and get heavily invested exactly the night before my exam leaving this here so i can come back im halfway thru and this reads like the only thing im wanting to finish
This was hands down one of the best reads for me on this app💛
thanks surbhi :)
Crazy good storytelling ong. brilliant dialogues uper se☝🏼☝🏼
that’s so nice — thank you
Interesting and really good writing as usual! But that drug part is scary!
heheh thanks, i’ll keep it mind agli baar se
this one hurt to read in the right way. the heroin stuff is genuinely scary — not in a dramatic way but in how matter-of-fact it reads, which is somehow worse. i hope raman finds his way through, and i hope you have someone holding space for you while you hold it for him. thinking of you both, sending loads of love.
aww this is such a kind comment, i’ll tell the guy who inspired raman what you said — he’ll be glad
thanks for reading
what a captivating read, it’s been a while since I’ve come across such a good piece on this app
ah thanks prachi
insane storytelling wtf you're so good at this
ayy right back at ya
i couldn't stop reading.
means a lot
Just let me watch the classico broski💔
dekh dekh bhai araam se, mera exam hai to sab pe impose kar raha
Dekhlia bhai abhi padha pura post.
First of all your story telling is so immaculate, you have such a strong grip on the show don't tell scheme of prose and I love how you do not resort to only that. You put elaborating sentences in between to add weight to certain dialogues, brilliant story and brilliant execution. Pls don kill yourself G, i need to read more stories from you😔
areé thanks so much for such a great reading and i assure you, suicide only interests me as a concept
Camus is that you?
pretense 😝
my jaw dropped multiple times while reading this— so, so good. you're such an awesome story teller. this is easily one of my favourites. wow
areé thanks so much shrey — you’re too kind
bitch why do i always find all these stories that u write and get heavily invested exactly the night before my exam leaving this here so i can come back im halfway thru and this reads like the only thing im wanting to finish
all the best bhai
wing friendship breakup heavy relate its always the vegetarians. i wish this was longer.
also, that’s what she said
friendship break ups hurt but not if they’re dorks
oh yea its a bit sad how it almost didnt hurt at all
Please do subscribe, it means a lot to me ❤️
nah nah — i don’t espouse drug use
as far as boys hostels go —that i’m glad about